Pitch Critiques Continue

Jessica Faust is still steadily critiquing pitches on the Bookends blog. I decided to start a new post because the old ones have fallen so far down on my blog list now. For those interested in one agent's opinion on what works in a pitch and what doesn't, Jessica has now completed the twenty-first round of pitch critiques. And the twenty-second round of pitch critiques. And the twenty-third round of pitch critiques. And the twenty-fourth round of pitch critiques. And the final, twenty-fifth round of pitch critiques.