Good Pitches, Bad Pitches at Bookends

Jessica Faust at Bookends has done a heroic ninth round of pitch critiques. For anyone who is depressed that your query isn't perfect, this round has proof of just how hard it is to write a good pitch. Jessica critiqued a pitch by a published author today and pointed out a number of problems with it. She also pointed out several new problems in this round of pitches and said she really liked one of them. So it's worth your time to check out her blog post if you're working on your pitch.