Another Round of Pitch Critiques

Jessica Faust has completed an eleventh round of pitch critiques. Yet again, good stuff. I'll probably just link all future critiques to this post rather than continuing to make a new post each time she does a critique.

In the twelfth round of pitch critiques, the pitches mainly lacked an explanation of what was uniquely at risk for the main character, how the story was different than other books on that same theme, or that tied everything in the pitch together coherently.

Jessica's at it again in the thirteenth round of pitch critiques. As always, more good stuff worth reading.

And now Jessica has finished a fourteenth round of pitch critiques.

And a fifteenth round of pitch critiques. And a sixteenth rough of pitch critiques. And a seventeenth round of pitch critiques. And an eighteenth round of pitch critiques. And a nineteenth round of pitch critiques.